Been in love

I was just going through a blog by Muskan called “The one minute writing challenge” and thought why don’t i give it a try, it would be fun.  I tried it, to be honest it took me somewhere nearly 10 minutes to complete the whole thing, ’cause i didn’t want to leave it incomplete. So basically i failed “The one minute challenge “.

So here is the thing i wrote, i have no idea, what it is… A song, a poem or just verses, may be you could tell, would love to hear from you guys.

                    
                      Been in love

Have you ever been in love
Have you ever seen your love
Do your heart beat out so loud
Have you ever been in love

Sometimes a night changes a life
Sometimes the wait keeps you alive
Sometimes the light dont come from sky
Sometimes sayin’ goodbye is a hard cry
Sometimes the time is no good enough
Sometimes the heart hit out so rough

Have you ever been in love
Have you ever seen your love
Do your heart beat out so loud
Do you know what feels like pain
Do you see how sad are the clouds
Do you know they weep as rain

Have you ever been in love
Do you feel the need to bow
Have you ever seen your love
Sometimes things happens, you just don’t know how

Have you ever been in love
Sometimes you just ain’t you
Sometimes the pain it puts you through
Sometime a smile is all you seek
Sometimes the chances look so bleak

Have you ever been in love
Have you ever seen your love

Abhay Rathore

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25 Comments Add yours

    1. Abhayaaryaan says:

      So its a poem then! I was so cofused about it’s belonging. ☺😄 Clichés to you

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      1. Haha…you never leave an opportunity to clishé😝

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      2. Abhayaaryaan says:

        Nice people demand it(clichés), glorified person receives it… You belong to the latter category.

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      3. Abhayaaryaan says:

        Again, clichés to you😆✋ for that

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      4. This will probably never get old, eh?😆

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      5. Abhayaaryaan says:

        Something the older they get, the finer they are…. 😊 You got me??

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      6. Abhayaaryaan says:

        😄 will it ever be enough??

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      7. Haha…I don’t think so xD

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      8. Abhayaaryaan says:

        You think very deep… #deepthoughts, the girl with the deep thoughts and you saying, you don’t think so?😆😂😂

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      9. My mind’s not working properly at the moment. It’s busy memorizing business studies or I should say commerce :p
        Ut tomorrow😰

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      10. Abhayaaryaan says:

        Sure😄… Commerce hahaha… You’re learning quick😆

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      11. What can I say? I’m quick learner xD
        Gtg..Varna I’ll fail tomorrow🙈

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  1. Hard to believe that such a beautiful poem has been written in mere 10 minutes.

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    1. Abhayaaryaan says:

      Well, sometime you do things which are not expected from you and that may be it😊…

      Like

  2. izza ifzaal says:

    This was just aot5

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      1. izza ifzaal says:

        Lol the typo 😂😂
        I meant apt! !

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      2. Abhayaaryaan says:

        Glad! You think so. Thank you.

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      3. izza ifzaal says:

        Ya I didn’t see ur posts in the reader. .I am glad I stumbled upon ur blog 🙂

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  3. tnvjain37 says:

    Reblogged this on Tanvi Jain's Blog and commented:
    @abhay_rathore your writings deeply inspire me to write more…….n this particular post of urs “been in love” will surely somewhere ignite the candle of love between two hearts…..

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    1. Abhayaaryaan says:

      Glad! That you like it. 😊 The feeling of love makes you write, your heart out. Thanks for the reblog.

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      1. tnvjain37 says:

        thanks to you that u knw there r still ppl in this world like u who understand this true feeling

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